Fun. Punching walls is a bad hobby—I mean, habit, just for the record.

It seemed real. And the title, obviously,was eyecatching. Your tense drives me a little crazy. But that’s normal.
_{lots of stars}

Very intriguing, I love the cool, detached tone of the narrator. Is it going anywhere?
LoA

This could very easily be a page out of a book. Good Job.