i like this one. it kinda flows!

Indeed. Love the flow of it. Makes me think of me and my bf, whos a year younger than me. Hmm, in the 4th line is it suppose to be year or yearn? I wasn’t sure of that.

it does flow really good, and i really like the rhyming! good idea for the poem too, it’s very deep.

o yurn i think it is the word that means longing idk how to spell it idk how to spell most things!