Whoa. O_O That was good. I could see the scene coming to life before my eyes. Yes, well, this seems to happen in all parties nowadays, doesn’t it? The last line really gave perspective, and I think it explains most of the things happening in the ficlet. Lovely adjectives, too. Thank you for entering! : )

wow. thats really good.

alcohol, the last hope of mankind ;-)

No, no, they’re not drunk. They’re playing ‘Spin the Bottle’! Really.

Haha! If it hadn’t been for your comment, THX , I would have thought he got her drunk… Lovely detail.

Don’t worry…it was obvious to me that it was Spin the Bottle :)
I really like this..you paint such a wonderful picture of this boy’s dream coming true !
One thing though.
This line is odd: The softest whisper of lips party.
Should it be lips parting ?