explanations of the story after this page
I wrote a story and thought people understood how it was going, but I guess it really is kind of hard to understand the narrators here. So I’ll explain.
There are two narrators in the story, and the story swaps between them. All of the stories told from one character’s point of view are separated from the other character’s by either = or -.
So, all the =’s are for one character, all the -’s are for the other.
I’m sorry if this makes you feel stupid for reading it, or anything like that, but after reading over the story, I decided it was kind of hard to understand and that maybe this would help..