yay! ficlet nirvana!

yes, you are allowed to enter your own challenge. It’s your challenge, you can do whatever you please.
But, if you’re gonna judge it, don’t consider it for consideration… that just might get people mad.
This is absolutely beautiful. Enough said.

I know, I’m nit picking, but I think things would flow better if there was a period after ‘screeched to a stop’ and get rid of the ‘and’ then start the new sentence with ‘Half an hour…” Otherwise, well done.