X) I like the conversation between Master & Xiaoli, it gives us a look at their relationship.
Hm…

Although, the ending (from “There must have been…” kind of confused me… maybe it’s because I read it quickly, but an explanation might be helpful to my slow, Monday-morning brain in order to completely understand (and therefore write a comprehensible sequel)

I hope I understood this one… if my sequel doesn’t make sense, just let me know and I’ll change it.