hehe =) this was fun to write

I loved your poem. it was very intense and dramatic..=)

That’s great. I liked the borderline sarcasm throughought, and the repitition of the title over and over. Repition just adss a bite to things.
(One teensy grammar point: In the line, O good! you didn’t too, I’d change the “too” to an “either.” I’d go into a “why” explanation, but that’d take too long, and frankly it’d probably be boring. So I’ll spare you all ;-D)

haha i noticed that too. but in the end i decided to go with what i had. i appreciate the tip!