nice build-up of suspense. i at first thought he was a pickpocket.

Ooh, a nice scene you’ve got here! I loved the ‘Female Body Inspector’ sentence. XD The last line also gives real body to the ficlet. Thank you very much for entering! : )

Lots of little details, and I think the style you went for here works well with the intended purpose.

Sweet deal lol. I wrote this fairly late last night, and I didn’t know if it would turn out well.