I liked it a lot, but it didn’t have the same subtly as THX ’s. Still, five stars.

Extra points for writing from her perspective. I liked the 9-10-10 sequence best myself.

This is way cool! It reminds me of thge Violent Femmes song ‘Kiss Off’- You know -1, 1 ,1 cuz you left me and 2,2,2, for my sorrow and 3,3,3 for my heartache and 4,4,4 for my sorrow…you know great song, great ficlet…

That is really cool! Very unique. The numbers is really cool, and it still flows.
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My condolences on losing your mother. I have felt your loss.
Good job on the ficlet.

great sequel. I see you’ve interpreted THX ’s ficlet as a challenge.

I like the way you incorporated the numbers, actually. Cool ficlet.
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