another absolutely astounding poem, pianoman!

Brilliant. It kind of reminds me of times when I can’t turn my brain off, and therefore not be able to sleep. You captured the want and need for rest perfectly. (one thing: the part that goes “Dark clouds/Rain out!/Poor out/Cleans my being…” , I think you want the word “pour” instead… dang homonyms)

haha yea!

This is really awesome poetry. I can see someone reading it really quickly and loudly at the storming parts and then slowly and softly sort of in the middle and in the end.