His mind is being controlled. That’s what.
A few spelling errors: ‘leaving’ in line 2, and ‘answered’ and ‘running’ in line 1 of para 3. I think you were just typing fast.
Something I (usually) do is copy and paste my ficlet’s to word before publishing to catch those kinds of errors. Spell check is my lifeline. lol
I like the repetition of the man/joe? Adds a bit of humor in the midst of the horror.
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His mind’s being controlled, that’s what.
A few spelling errors: ‘leaving’ in line 2, and ‘answered’ and ‘running’ in line 1 of para 3. What I (usually) do is copy and paste my ficlets onto word to check for those kinds of errors.
I like the repetition of ‘the man/Joe?’ it kind of adds a bit of humor amidst the horror.
LoA

urg. stupid stupid slow computer.
Sorry for the double post. That keeps happening to me today.

I hope Joe (if that’s what we’re going to call him for now) snaps out of it. He seemed like such a good guy. I wonder why they keep picking him to kill Audrey instead of the creepy lady. Maybe for the irony.

I hope Joe (if that’s what we’re going to call him for now) snaps out of it. He seemed like such a good guy. I wonder why they keep picking him to kill Audrey instead of the creepy lady. Maybe for the irony.

Shoot I double posted too. Sorry.