I just realized I’ve been doing a lot of Ezra POVs, haven’t I?

You have, and quite nicely I might add.
I can just hear a menacing voice hissing the last line. But which voice is it? Could it be Henry, or the Commissioner, or someone else? Hm…
You can still do a few more sequels, I think five would bring the balance back to this series, as far as sequel-numbers go.

I also liked the senses of relief, too. And the beginning reminded me of when Ezra was first introduced in this series, and he couldn’t stay awake. I’m beginning to think that this guy might have mild narcolepsy… but only mild.
I also enjoyed the quick stream of words from Lily in her excitement.
And, more gag-speak!

Tada! More gag speak, hyper speak, and narcolepsy! What could be better than that? Well, I have an idea for one more sequel, but NaNoWriMo is taking its toll on my ficleting…