Comments on The Fall of the Temple Part 1 by Asquialin

Mistress Elsha Hawk

hmm this sounds familiar…. lol, I do a good job editing don’t I? Honestly I didn’t edit this part… you rock, hon!
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:56:11.
Mistress Elsha Hawk

oh and welcome to ficlets! and I KNOW you are sequelling this and that it will get better and better…
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:56:11.
ALRO613 ♪ LoA ♫

Welcome to Fictlets!!!! A great start to an epic fantasy.. I look forward to more.
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:56:11.
Blusparrow

Welcome to ficlets! I look forward to a more too! =)
LoA
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:56:12.
Asquialin

This story is actually up to chapter 6, but i carefully edit each segment before posting. It’s almost, if not quite, the final draft, unless of course I get an idea that requires reworking something in this early part.
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:56:12.