i really like it! That’s exactly how i felt when i had my first crush. a bunch of people could definitely relate. great work!

I liked the first part of this. I felt compelled to read it aloud, and that’s a good thing. It wasn’t enough to just read it, I had to hear it because I couldn’t get enough! I really related except to the whole best friend bit…I, fortunately, have never experienced that, but the basic idea that it’s not you he likes. I loved that it wasn’t a happy ending, because they don’t always happen in real life. And this is a very real idea. Fantastic work.

this is cute. It does remind me of my first crush! sigh

thats really good. i think the best part was how the ending wasn’t wat she wanted, but deep down, it was. : ] good job.

i luv it more then a barrell of potatos

ooo its really good. i liked how it’s only like two or three words on a line, it adds a little more feeling to it than if it had been all in one sentence. great!

btw, its aura, not ora. but great story!

that was really good, sad, but hey that’s life!

wow, i can totaly relate, and all i have to say is, ouch. so sad and so true like life and i love the way its broken up. awesome.

omygosh who honestly CANT relate? that is reaaaally god at capturing…i dont know…everything? anyway, great job!

very true to life

poppin.

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luvvved it.

very pretty and sooooo true!! great job…