Love this line: “She didn’t know where to go but she wanted to breathe.” Your character descriptions in this piece are fantastic. You paint a very beautiful picture with that intriguing ethereal quality to it. Great job! This is another gorgeous line: “The girl seemed to dance with every move she made…”
Love this line: “She didn’t know where to go but she wanted to breathe.”
Your character descriptions in this piece are fantastic. You paint a very beautiful picture with that intriguing ethereal quality to it. Great job!
This is another gorgeous line: “The girl seemed to dance with every move she made…”
C. Davida