Okay, this is a little “choppy.” So many ideas… so few characters… Forgive me. :)

Maybe it’s because I’m still half asleep, but I was kind of confused. I sort of get what’s happening, but at the same time I don’t, really… I can tell the idea’s there, though, and it’s a good one.

Ooh, creepy. The doc is the killer. Good job keeping it to one ficlet, that’s pretty had to do sometimes.

I agree with g2. It’s very iffy and kind of confusing. But the idea is quite original. A docter murdering patients on purpose. Aw man, i’d love to see that one come to life. Great job. *

This is why I don’t EVER go to hospitals…they are sadistic killers at hearty…not really(maybe,you never know)

It is confusing. I think it needed breaking up into, oh I don’t know, about three ficlets, but I stuck to the rules. Something I rarely do. ;D

I didn’t think it was all that confusing. The opening line makes much more sense on a second read-through, but it was definitely apparent to me, that this doctor gets his satisfaction from losing patients.
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I’d agree that it could benefit from being multiple ficlets though as to provide more setting and a little background, but where’s the fun in that?

i’m with John perkins.. .it wasn’t that confusing… maybe all tthis ficlet reading is causing my brain to get bigger… killer doctors r bad

It’s interesting, but yeah…it could’ve been developed more to make it better. Good idea.