Very fast-paced, very intense… very good.

Nice job. Knelt is spelled with a k like knees.

oops! I fixed it! :D

Some of the later entries have started making more unique characters instead of the same crazy slasher. Great job, and a quick look at the death of one of this guys kills. *

interesting… you weren’t too descriptive (which isn’t a bad thing), but the title helps and you can figure it out as the story goes on.

thanks…i think! lol. i kind of didn’t want to be too descriptive, cause I usually am. I wanted to test how well i could write without describing everything. to get the author to figure it out a little

wow! this is so great! I love this story! there are so many conclusions that one can draw from it. Plus I totally love the title. I have the song “Son of a Preacher Man” on my iPod. great job, artist_girl!