Wow, Tad. Wow, I don’t know what to say. Its beyond good. It’s just, wow.
LoA

1st; I liked the double spacing.

2nd; very deep,like a moral at the end of a fable.

I’m kind of at a loss. This is very, very well written. I love the last sentence especially.

just ..wow..Its really well written and I like how it grabs your attention really quickly

That’s deep, man. I… I don’t know how else to describe it.
I don’t think I could write something that deep even if I tried (and if I did, it’d come out horrendiously). Bravo.