Heehee, I love the spanish at the beginning. (one nitpicky thing: porque, the one meaning “because,” is strung together as one word, and without an accent.) But beautifully written.

i reallyliked this..provoked my emotions…

@ g2.. the por que was meant to be have a space and an accent, becuase i wanted it to mean ‘why’

ah-HA! Why didn’t I catch that? gah…