Oh, it’s that kind of dad. What a painful thing. Very well written.

This is very difficult to read in its current form. You should break up your paragraphs so that we aren’t looking at a huge wall of text. Especially when you switch characters in dialog. Each character should have his or her own paragraph for dialog to make the transition easier for readers to follow.
Other than that, I like that you followed up with the character’s reticence to tell his family the truth. It gives the character depth, beyond what you would expect in a simple love story.

Full of angst and worry, conflict, self doubt. A worthy sequel. Thanx for writting it. Couldn’t have done it better myself..
5 stars

Sequal!!!!!

Sequal!!!!!

oh please please PLEASE I need more! sequel!

this is awsome when people see a gey person they dontsee the conflicts like this with not only everyone else but with themselves. good job showing that.

aw..thats kind of sad how he feels like he can’t be accepted.