Well, this is very interesting. I’m not sure how to react. The prequel made me sad and a little angry. But the outfit you’ve described for Lord Poozzab… well, not something I would picture someone casually stutting up to a lunch table in :)
But like I said, it’s interesting, and well written, too. I like it more than the $#&#38;! #<sup> @*#(#</sup> #x%x <sup>$$# @x%x ^%$# in some of your others ;)

his outfit kind of sounds like a superhero!