Nice start. Good Job.

Great setup. Is there more? Tell me there’s more! Somebody tell me there’s more!

Them two up there summed up my feelings pretty well. Very cool start, and I hope there’s more coming.

Cool sci fi tale,, I wonder if he know regrets No going with them,

Ooh, effective character voice, fun establishment of some characters and relationships, all in a very tight space and with a heck of a potential for more story.