that was so adorable..really sweet moment.and it was really nicley written:)
aww. I love it. So sweet. I have chills running down my arms. Now I’m going to want it to rain everyday.
oh that is the sweetest!i love your characters and the scene you set up.. very cute!
Omg that was super cute! you did a great job with the descriptions, I could really see the couple there at the bus stop. I love the dialogue between them. Great job!
Sacharine sweet.. I love the rain and kissing in the rain sounds so Nice, makes waiting for a bus so much nicer.
(:Shay:)luvs_ashleyparkerangel:)
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