Wow you paint an action packed thriller, worthy of a tv cop show script.. be interesting to know why he is being pursued..great job as usual.

Very impressive. I could see all of that. And, if I can trust your tags, you nirvana-ed this one, too? I’m extremely impressed.
I wonder why he’s being persued, too… hm… begins to ponder

wow, really great descriptions. I could imagine it all
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Action packed! Makes me wonder what is crime was.

Action packed! Makes me wonder what is crime was.