This is cute, but there are a few errors in it. “I’m Feel Dirty.” was one. also your italics didn’t work.

But as usual, you guys are writing a fantastic story of these two.

She doesn’t deserve him; there are so many other girls that want him!!!
:) LOL He’s too good to be true. And I really like how he kept repeating her name to sort of reassure her of her identity.
Fix the errors and it’s perfect. I have break soon, so I’ll get in a sequel, I promise.

She doesn’t deserve him; there are so many other girls that want him!!!
:) LOL He’s too good to be true. And I really like how he kept repeating her name to sort of reassure her of her identity.
Fix the errors and it’s perfect. I have break soon, so I’ll get in a sequel, I promise.

Sequel :)))))))