Brilliant. I honestly felt shivers down my spine.Prayers left unanswered drive many people to despair.
Ack, I have to compete with this brilliant story? It made me think of the Columbine shooting.
I agree, I thought of Columbine too, though this seems to be a suicide. Great writing! I love the desperation, the silent crying out. Sadly, most either look the other way, or never notice.
This is very well done. Can’t really add more than what the others have said.
very touching
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