I agree with you on people adding comments. Amazing that 50 people can read your stuff and maybe you get only 2 or 3 comments. I thought this ficlet was well written. Good Job.

wow. one can totally relate to the girl’s pain and aprehension. this is amazing. great work conveying a message that arises much controversy.

Ha ha. This is exactly the way I feel about babies. I never understood the allure of them, but I do recognize that at least a few people need to have them for us to survive as a species. Luckily there are plenty of people having more than enough of them to make up for my lack of contribution.
Good job.

well, there’s always hospice…
better get your affairs in order, tell your family you’d rather die…
you could change to Christian Scientist, they have nurses, trained to pray you to healing…
Awesome ficlet! I love the slow build up to the reveal :)

wow,, this is great.. a very controversial subject.. and i completely agree with the doctor

AHHH ! I just googled teratomas, and I wish I hadn’t! But great story!