Although the main plotline isn’t quite my thing, I LOVE the idea of a short poem introducing the chapter. That gets full marks alone!

i like this
at first when you said sisters, i thought she was matts sister and kinda got confused
but then my blonde moment went away and i realized what you meant hahaha
really good job
and i also like how you begin each one with a part from a song, really neat idea

hey, your back! Yay! =D this series is back too! Woot!
LoA