hehehe. I like this one.

Cool story about a differnt kind of childhood.

Wow! this is so awesome! my story, “Residing Dreams” is about a similar topic. one tag for it is residing dreams. you seem like a great writer, so keep it up! i hope you enjoy my story as much as I’ve enjoyed yours.

good job darkfold…i like it

this is interesting. this story is unconventional and unique. i like it.

however, I don’t understand the first line. what is going on? who is bleeding, and why? other than that though, this is a good start to what i hope might turn into a series.