I REALLY like this ficlet. the sentences are all great and perfectly placed, and i love the sweet dialogue, and the characters. i even like that it’s in lower case letters, but it is a little annoying when the punctuation is missing. you might want to try to fix that up. otherwise GREATWORK !
(:Shay:)luvs_ashleyparkerangel:)
(:Shay:)luvs_ashleyparkerangel:)
Demosthenes
Lena
Green Apple