I love this one alot.the descriptions are so….descriptive lol =)

Lovely use of imagery.

Ooooh…I love it! Can’t wait to see what happens next…guess I’ll see what they wrote in the sequel! lol

great work, excellently descriptive

”…knew he was too drunk to be vertical.” Awesome. Makes me want to go drinking…I mean not go drinking.

Thanks everyone. Your comments have inspired me to come back to Ficlets and try again.