So, I lied about writing another poem. Weird, normally I refuse but this one I couldn’t hold in.

Beautiful. and God does understand all our emotions. You are good at poetry. ery heartfelt.

Lovely use of the two lines and a lot of juxtapositions.

I loved this, Jenunique. I don’t tend to gravitate to poems that rhyme, but it works here.

I agree with Ana Cristina- I’m not generally a rhyming person, but I love this. And I don’t think you should hold in any poems at all ;)