awww..that is so sad..this is perfect as it is, all the emotions were portrayed very clearly and effectively..great job:)

awww..that is so sad..this is perfect as it is, all the emotions were portrayed very clearly and effectively..great job:)

wow, I love this, really powerful
poor guy

Aww, so sad, but powerful. I can feel the emotions coming off of the page.

very well-written, i liked it