very creative!
I love it. great for the christmas spirit.

Funny.. the commercialism of the holiday takes away from the charm of christmas past.

I loved this and I agree 100% with M. Paul Regret’s comment. (And mind you, I have a few electronics on my “wish list” this year, so I can’t really talk.)

The confusing part to me was that the younger kid wanted the video game machine, and the older kid wanted the Teddy Ruxpin 2000.
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I dig your writing style man, and this is another cool story. I also love that Nick is a thief caught in the act. Your Nick reminds me a lot of Robot Santa.