awwww so sad….hha like the screen names:)

thought you would… just off the top of my head too (:

haha:) k you’ve been sequeled:)

Aww, I don’t like Mitch memories. Reading on.

The translator scene was really witty ;) I giggled. You have good conversations, yet I find the actual writing hard to follow sometimes. Make sure there’s a difference between narrative, thought, and speaking

ya… but I ran out of room so i couldn’t make it as detailed as i wanted…
:(