Very very beautiful! Bravo to you! Write more!

I have to agree with Callie: beautiful. It was a really, however crude my wording is, cool way to put it. (I’m tired and can’t think of any other words) And, since I can’t believe I missed this, a very belated welcome to ficlets.

Eek, I just realized my mistake! I didn’t notice the other pages! I thought you were only here for a month or so. embarassed face I guess that would make it a very very belated welcome. Teehee!

Once again I plead ignorance. Forget everything I’ve said except that this was a good literary piece of work. sighs My mistakes tire me.

i love this poem. awesome metephors.