please comment!!! it means everything 2 me!!! ill write more if u comment!!!

it started well, but i think the last stanza didn’t do it for me.

i don’t understand the last line of the last stanza. it almost feels like your making fun of people who cut there wrists.. “ever since i became an emo fag”.
what started off emotionally strong, slipped to complaints and confusion.

I’m not sure I understand the perspective. It’s a poignant poem, surely, and with a little work could definitely be wonderful, but it’s a little confused. I don’t know, maybe you went for that, the message being that life is confusing and so is the way that people handle it.