This kind of reminds me of Holden’s view of the world in The Catcher in the Rye; seeing everything as phoney. Very strong emotions conveyed brilliantly here. Well done.

Wow nice job. It does seem like people are trying to change other people instead of themselves. Its like they know whats best for other people. Or people who fake who they are just to fit in. Your not stupid. The people that have no idea they are destroying themselves are stupid.