Interesting – I think you should turn this into a story. It could be a great beginning if the main character was thinking to herself – “I wish I could just get the courage to look into his eyes and see the passion that I feel in mine.” All kinds of places you could go with that – a comedy like 16 candles or even a tragedy / drama. Well done.

Very nice. Well done.

Very touching.

beautiful. i know exaxtly how that feels

sigh. i love good poetry.

This is gorgeous. I know how it feels to be scared to look into to someone’s eyes…but then once I did, I couldn’t look away.