hey, this is Jean Paul
well, I think it’s really good, you used alot of detail which lets you imagine it in your mind, but I think you should write a little bit more, kind of give some background on the characters of this story.
and at the end it kind of leaves you wondering what she’s gonna do….
so yea, I look forward to the second part, good job, I really liked it, you’re an awesome writer

its been a while since you wrote this, i hope pans for a second one are somewhere in your mind….

i meant plans, not pans, sorry

Well, two more sequels. I need to do a prequel but my inspiration is slipping for the moment. So I will get around to it later. heh. Thank you so much for the comments and the veiws!!
LostHope_LostHeart

My fiance is in there screwing that girl and I am just sitting here waiting for him to let me know he’s finished
He’s still her fiance?

There will not be any more sequels to this. At least not by me. I have “closed the book” on this story line. Sorry to any one who was hoping for more on this one. I doubt any one was though. Heh.