I liked it in a “I’m crazy in love for you” sorta way. I pictured myself writing this in a card to my wife – she would have loved it until the end. Agree with Laine on that one. You kinda ran outta gas at the end, but hey – that happens.
I luvv it! It sounds like something I would write.Actually its something I wish I could have wrote. I especially lovved the ILOVE U IS THAT OK ? line because even if he says its not okay, there’s nothing u can do to stop your love anyway.
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