Nice wrap-up. I felt it was true to the original as well. I am curious as to why Mandy talked to Slain, but overall I found it satisfying.

I like this story. Its a little confusing but its pretty good.

Alexa: why did Mandy Teller talk to Frank Slain? Why is Rick Burns trying to blow up a strip club and why is it important for it to look like a terrorist act? What’s Frank Slain’s angle? Did someone hire Slain or is something else going on?
In other words, write a sequel! It may become part of the story or simply a fork that dead-ends. Either way, your contribution matters! Give it a go!