Well, this is my first ficlet, and I’m hoping it gets noticed. I really wanted to accomlish a romantic kiss scene, and if you could tell me how well it was done, that would be much appreciated.

I think it was good in expressing kind of a hidden love in such a short amount of words. Very nice!

Aww, I also love this story ;) I’ve never done a romance ficlet so when I read them it always makes me smile. You did a great job on the kiss.

I agree, this ficlet was very well written. I’m not very good at romance, so it’s great that you can do it, and well!

Nice.

i like this…did you get the name nyra from guardians of ga’hoole by any chance? anyway, great first ficlet…if it’s anything to judge by, it’s fat better than my first ficlet. good job.