this is really good. i really like the first paragraph, it’s so well written and amazingly done. but for some reason the second paragraph doesn’t strike as great a chord in me as the first does. but it’s still really well written

Noted and edited. Thanks for the comment, I didn’t much like it either.

I like it. Haha, I don’t know what else to say.

Wow, I really loved it… its something I can relate to perfectly.

I like the second paragraph best.

Music is always my favorite way to drown out problems. Nice job.

This is a really good little story here because it’s somthing we can all relate to. Great job!
Deathly Hallows is the best book ever! I read to page 480 in 4 days, ive stopped reading to let the world catch up, but its hard when they’re so many things a wanna know!

i like both paragraphs. good description. i wish i could write the way you people write. I write songs so it’s hard for me. Especially dialogue.