Just a short poem about a picture I saw in my mind. I couldn’t explain it in literal terms, so this suffices. :)

this is really good, great imagery

Amazing work, one of your best. Keep it up.

It’s beautifully depressing, and that’s a good thing.

I agree the imagery was clear in my mind.

Very detailed and whatnot

I like this alot. I can’t believe I didnt comment on it, since I comment on just about EVERYTHING . It does seem somewhat depressing. Good Work.