Hey, this is great! The title is very attracting, too. You did a great job!

haha. this is good. love the title and love the content. although that breakfast is HUGE !!! lmao

Haha, I have a friend JUST like that…so I can relate.

……now i want french toast. _

You should be proud of yourself as an author because you've achieved the "implanted sense" a writer loves to use. It's where someone may read something of yours and your writing about a certain object makes them taste, smell, feel, see, hear, or want that object. It's a very powerful thing and also very useful. Good job! =]