wow this made me almost cry. So much emotion in so few words. Good job

You are a wonderful poet, and I love that you don’t rhyme.

beautiful. your poetry is heart warming and haunting.

uhm i’ve come to fear [from reading your reviews] that perhaps i am the only person on ficlets who appreciates rhymey poetry… :::sigh::: oh well, if they dont like it they dont have to read.

Ok so uhm i liked this, the way you connected everything was amazing. Your writing was fluid and easily followed. It was a rather inspiring poem, [inspiring to move on from grief]