Well I’m no renowned writer so who am i to judge you, huh. But i do think you’ve got a nice style. I can’t tell how old you are, but keep at it. Love the twist at the end.

likin the context write more bout this good start

oooh my, I wonder why the mother wouldn’t just tell the news/police about the father? and she’s actually selfless keeping in there for her childs sake.
good job!