I like this, not exactly sure why, but I like it.
I see it ending in murder or bigamy, but I’d like to see where you go with this.
Great story!!

i want to see how this all turns up : )

To be honest, I’m not sure where it goes, either. I think I have one more Sheila chapter, but I don’t know what should happen after that. Please (anyone) – give me commentary! If you start your own ficlet off this (or another story), let me know. I’d like to read it.

So far, this story is working out better than I thought, though.

I kind of feel that this backstory should come after the second Jessica part (4A). Also, I feel that this section needs a 3C. The kiss was impulsive. I’d like to see some of James’ thought process at continuing and progressing in his relationship with Jessica.

whoa, sudden love, that’s my favorite ;]