blahaha. that is really great. i have to say though, the parents’ bickering is taking up most of the story. its getting just a little repetitive. Otherwise, though, really great job. really really great job.

tho, i suppose the bickering adds humor…hmmm…

I know, the bickering is getting a little bit repetitive, I guess I’m just addicted to it. But the story will get moving here soon, I swear!